Monday, February 11, 2013

What Is Love?

Hey guys, there's a love poem contest going on at my school.  Do you think I got a shot at winning?



What Is Love?

Love is the pink petals of a newborn rose
Love is the soft sunlight of a dawning sky
Love is the crude kiss of a wandering wind
Love is the sustaining soil of a verdant earth

Love is the chubbiness of an infant’s cheeks
Love is the depth of a smile’s dimples
Love is the swelling of a woman’s heart
Love is the yearning of a man’s soul

Love is the embrace of a faithful father
Love is the caress of a marvelous mother
Love is the jabs of a bothersome brother
Love is the smack of a smirking sister

Love is the world’s word of misuse
Love is the child’s emblem of hope
Love is the star’s source of light
Love is the sage’s center of thought

Love is the seamless intertwining of fingers
Love is the undeniable power of Shakespeare
Love is the potent adversary of hate
Love is the purest essence of life

Love is the cross of Christ on a hill

Sunday, January 27, 2013

Little Shop of Horrors

Hey guys, I'm back with another review!  Okay, so from Wednesday night to Saturday night, West Covina High School's Theatre program put on a production of the musical "Little Shop of Horrors."  My dad and I agree that it was a great performance - it was totally worth the twenty two dollars I paid for his ticket and my ticket.  For those of you who haven't heard of this musical, here's the synopsis: a geeky guy named Seymour works at a rundown flower shop and finds an alien plant that feeds on human blood.  Seymour and the plant make a deal that if the plant continues to bring him fame, he'll keep feeding the plant human bodies (I know, it's gross).  By the musical's end the plant eats Seymour and his friends and it lives happily ever after.

The plot was certainly interesting as well as kinda disgusting, but in this review I'll stick to West Covina High's performance.  Although everyone had beautiful (or at least decent) singing voices, the ensemble singing could have used some more work.  Only one person sang so clearly that I could understand everything she was singing, and that was Andrea Franco; she was an Alumni playing the lead female role.  Not only did she have a great singing voice, her enunciation and acting was superb.  From what a cast member said, Andrea was not a part of the original cast, but rather filled in two weeks before the show's premier.  If so, Andrea pulled herself together masterfully.  I also appreciated the street urchins' singing, save for the times they tried to sing together.  Every time they tried, the words got somewhat muddled.  I don't know about you, but I personally like to understand what the actors are saying.

Musical performances aside, I think Everett Cabon was the perfect guy to play Seymour; he looked and acted the part very well in my opinion.  Stephanie Torres was an awesome Mrs. Mushnik, which I will tell her personally when I see her in Creative Writing.  It was kinda funny seeing my friends acting as homeless people, sitting lazily for most of the musical; I imagine that was loads of fun during rehearsals.  Oh, I also LOVED the live music being played throughout the whole performance; that was a job extremely well done.  Overall I think the Theatre department should be very proud of all their hard work and I can't wait to see their rendition of Neil Simon's Plaza Suite.








Sunday, January 20, 2013

Ode to a Friend

This post is dedicated to Grace Moore, whose birthday is today.  Love ya, chica!

Ode to a Friend
For Grace Moore

My love so dear,
Should I want another sister,
It would be you, I fear.
None can quite understand
The bonds that have us entwined,
Yet none would reprimand.

I do oft wonder
Whether anything vexes you,
For wrongs roll down your shoulder
So very smoothly,
Without a scratch on your skin.
You endure my remarks so patiently.

Rejuvenating camaraderie,
Overflowing in your fountain,
Quenches me for free.
Yet not so free, perhaps, 
For when you need me,
I'll join you in your mishaps.

Saturday, December 22, 2012

Bullying

Hey guys, guess what?  I won another short story contest!  It was a totally random contest, too, since it's annually hosted by a dentist named Dr. Copeland.  I was in the 10th-12th grade category and won a $20 gift card to Barnes & Noble.  I thank God for that provision.  I'll probably post a review of whatever book I use the gift card to buy.  I cut and pasted the story for your reading pleasure.

Before you read it, however, I would like to add in a little commentary.  I wrote this story about a contemporary issue at schools everywhere: bullying.  I have personally been mistreated by other kids, so I know the feeling of rejection.  If anyone who is reading this has been or is being bullied, know that you are not alone.  When I was in elementary school, a girl among my circle of friends began to treat me so poorly that I moved on from that group.  I made new friends who appreciated me as I was and eventually let go of my anger.  I never did find out why that girl turned against me, but it doesn't matter.  Don't be afraid to tell someone you trust about your pains.  Bullying is a serious thing, and you need to speak out if you are a victim of it.  There are other ways of dealing with a bully, as my story will show you.  Know that even if you feel that the world has turned against you, God NEVER will.  His arms are open to embrace you and let you know that you are never alone.

Saturday, November 17, 2012

Look for Me


I know it hasn't even been a week since my last post, but I've just been inspired.  So, I had to write this down and, of course, I had to post it.  Edits and critiques are welcome, especially since this is hot off the press.
Look for Me
Look for Me in the shadows,
in the depths.
Look for Me in your heart,
in your very soul.
Look for Me, darling,
look for Me.
I say it again.
Look for Me in the mass
of people before you.
Look for Me in the eyes
of a total stranger
and of a close friend.
Look for Me everywhere.
Look for Me in the hallowed halls
and in the grimy gutters.
I am everywhere.
I am right behind you.
I am nose-to-nose with you.
I am just above you;
the soles of My feet just graze
the crest of your head.
I am below you, calling your name.
Ah, look for me, for I am waiting
to be found by you.
I purposely leave behind my tracks.
I discard the clues along my path.
I write you a note everyday.
I send you the treasure map to find Me,
and yet you have not found Me.
Where are you?
Everywhere that I am not.
Oh how I long for you,
sweet child of mine.
You know where I am.
Come look for Me.
I promise you will find Me.

He is not lost, but wants to be found.

Monday, November 12, 2012

Wreck It Ralph

Well, I haven't reviewed a movie in a while, so I'm giving this a shot.  I saw the animated movie Wreck It Ralph with my dad and sister this past Saturday, and I had a great time.  I rate it as a ten out of ten, but Dad rates it as a seven out of ten.  Why?  I have no idea.  I liked the movie for its adorkability and cheesiness.  Okay, so we have all seen the theme of wanting to be accepted by society, and instead being cruelly rejected.  The experience isn't fun, to say the least.  Wreck It Ralph, a story about a bad guy in an arcade game who's tired of being bad, puts an interesting twist to the usual motif of alienation.

From seeing the previews alone, I pretty much had all the characters pegged down.  Ralph is an average guy who's tired of his job and the lack of appreciation.  Vanellope (gosh, what a name!) is a gal with lots of attitude (which is perhaps why I love her so much) and a really soft heart once you get past the crusty surface.  Fix-it Felix is a nice guy, although I found the romantic intrigue between him and the kick-butt Sergeant Calhoun a little strange at first.  Love really crosses all boundaries, doesn't it? Now that I think about it, Felix and Calhoun remind me of a romance between an elf and a giant (yes, I literally mean an elf and a giant) in the movie Ella Enchanted.  Now there's a height difference for you!

Anyway, unconventional romances aside, I thought the movie was first-rate for passing the time with your friends.  I laughed, I nearly cried, and I enjoyed myself.  I definitely recommend this movie to anyone who hasn't seen it yet, at least to anyone who doesn't mind cheesiness.

Thursday, October 18, 2012

The Bulldog

Hi all!  So I haven't posted in a month, and I feel I should explain myself.  I haven't updated, but not because my reading has suddenly halted or my creative juices have stopped flowing.  The fact is that any free time I have is gobbled up by friends, college prep, or FanFiction.  However, I decided to post today because something significant happened to me this week.

You see, there was this Bulldog Pride Contest at my school.  Through any form of artistic expression (e.g. drawing, poem, short story), a student was supposed to show what bulldog pride means to him or her.  I chose to participate through my short story "The Bulldog."  I definitely didn't expect to win, especially since I didn't win the poetry contest last year.  However, to my amazement and utter joy I did win!  And no, the prize wasn't just a pat on the back and a sense of gratefulness.  I also won a Target gift card for $25!  I plan to spend it on something long-lasting and memorable, so that I'll always remember this historic achievement.  What it will be exactly I haven't figured out.  I thank God for providing for this awesome blessing and hope that this portends my future success in my writing career.  I copied and pasted the winning story below.  Enjoy!


The Bulldog

“I swear Anna, you are the least-spirited senior on the planet!” my sister Sally exclaimed at the bottom of the stairs as she waited for me to trudge down after her.

I grunted moodily and snapped back, “And you are the most annoying freshman in the history of freshmen.”

Sally groaned and smacked her forehead with an aggravated air.  “At least I have school spirit.  I’m wearing my class color and everything.  And what have you got?”

“A cheery disposition,” I replied sarcastically.

Sally rolled her eyes and opened the door.  I followed her out with a smug look as we began the trek to our high school, which was only a block away.  Looking back, I wonder why that bulldog had to wait until my last day of senior year to help me discover the spirit of my school.

Sally and I parted ways once we reached the school; she went off to hang out with her fellow munchkins and I decided to take a short nap while leaning against an exterior wall of the E-building.  The dreamy daze of my tired eyes was interrupted when I heard heavy, animal-like panting and felt sticky goo drop onto my forehead.

My eyes shot open and before me I saw a giant, heaving, happy bulldog staring at me in anticipation.  I wiped the dog’s saliva off my face in disgust, wondering where on earth this behemoth came from.  I glanced behind the bulldog and saw that the bulldog statue that usually stood proudly on its pedestal at the quad was missing.  I must be hallucinating, I thought, because this giant canine has come to life.

The bulldog gestured for me to climb aboard its back, and I did so because I figured it was all a dream anyway and I couldn’t possibly get hurt.  Instantly the canine began bounding toward the L-buildings, and I gripped tightly onto his collar to prevent myself from falling.  I heard the bell ring, and lurched forward when the bulldog abruptly stopped in front of my old freshman classroom.  I peeked inside and saw a classroom of people whom I knew very well, but looked like their old freshmen selves.

The desks were arranged in a makeshift courtroom, and an old classmate of mine – he was shorter than I remember – began pointing at the accused and shouting that he had violated his daughter Mayella Ewell.  I thought of what poor taste it was to kill that mockingbird Tom Robinson, and then the bulldog was off again.

We raced across the soccer field, baseball field, and football field.  Briefly I saw the enormous football players lining up like a band of soldiers facing enemy lines.  The bleachers were stuffed with cheering onlookers who screamed in excitement and adulation of their favorite sport.  CIF championship here we come.

We reentered the quad, and the dancers were already in formation, as if they had been waiting for us.  Their uniform motions were smooth, fluid, and teeming with bubbling energy and passion.  Their bodies moved up, down, all around the quad in a firework of locomotion, until they dramatically paused to pose at the bulldog.  The hip-hop music that had been playing in the background still ricocheted in my eardrums even when the bulldog ran onward.           

            All the doors to the classrooms were open, letting us see the clubs in the midst of their business.  One group talked about beach cleanup, another the local animal shelter, another the plight of bullying, another the upcoming blood drive, and another so much more.  I heard the Step Squad stomping its feet in a clamor of loud smacks and thumps.  I saw the navy blue of the uniforms of AFJROTC as they marched forward with our patriotic flag.

            All of the people, buildings, and activity became a blur as the bulldog ran faster, faster, faster.  The things I had seen became a mixture of colors, sounds, smells, and the paths of everyone’s lives intertwining inextricably together.  Finally it all spiraled down to one scene, leaving me dizzy and amazed.

            We were back on the football field, and the bleachers were just as filled as when the football game was taking place.  Except this time the people were not cheering; they were silently watching the ocean of maroon sitting in front of a large stage.  The senior graduates stood triumphantly wearing their caps and gowns in a unified body of bulldog pride.  If the bulldog that had been my guide could cry I’m sure he would have burst into tears at the beauty of it all.  The small, the tall, the gentle, the gruff, the brown-eyed, the blue-eyed, the athlete, the genius, the artist, the actor, the writer are all standing side-by-side.  Those four years had all built up to that one fantastic event of this fully culminated school spirit.  I saw myself in the midst of that flood of maroon & gold school spirit.

            The bulldog carried me back to where we started, in front of the science department building.  He strode majestically back to his pedestal, and before I could think to thank him, he was already frozen in place, baring his teeth at the incoming students of another new year.

            I run to the cluster of trees that I know my sister always lounges at, and recklessly push aside her friends.  She glances at me weirdly, but I don’t care.  I grip her by the shoulders and practically shout at her in my enthusiasm.

            “Sally, you were right!” I exclaim.  “About the school pride, about everything.  It’s not just about those colorful rallies, or high test scores, or extracurricular activities.  It’s about all of us as a student body sharing the high school experience together.  Bulldog pride is about taking pride in yourself and all the people who have walked this journey of life with you.”

            Sally smiles softly and withdraws from my grasp to look at me meaningfully.

            “I don’t know what has gotten into you since the ten minutes we’ve been apart, but I’m glad that you finally get me, get this school,” she says.

            I nod in agreement.  “Now that I have, I think the rest of my life can finally begin with spirit.”